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Malled to Death (Draft) (ACT I)

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Entitled customers, deranged managers, and after hours hide-and-seek are just a few of the antics included in a typical day for a group of minimum wage employees at a dying mall.

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Comedy | 1 Reviews | 22 pages | 1 month ago | Draft 5


Have you ever worked a minimum wage job and depended on those measly checks to make ends meet? Have you ever had a customer so terrible it made you contemplate murder? How about get into trouble with coworkers for filling the water fountain with cheese dip you stole from Pedro’s in the food court to celebrate that Quinceanera you never got? Well, if you have, the team members at the All Roads mall feel your pain.


The overall angle of the show really connects with me, I to worked retail when I was in school and could definitely relate to having a group of wild characters that differ.

Amanda was pretty straight forward and helps center the story. Myrtle brings the “retail for life” manager feels, Mac is the cheerful for no reason, Lunch Bag the awkward silent type.

I definitely felt Karl and Vinny were the best characters. I loved the fact that only K...

1 month ago |
Eddie Listisen Top Reviewer

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