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The Anti-Christ Kid

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A ghostly, demon like X-Men type story with the beginning starts in a foggy day. Then a girl has an X-men demon type experience.

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Mystery/Suspense,Thriller,Drama | 1 Reviews | 5 pages | 1 month ago | Draft 2

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Rose is a girl who's powers are not normal

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I liked the concept of this story, although its still in somewhat rough shape. It'll be interesting to see where he takes the characters since we only get a glimpse.

The structure definitely needs worked on, luckily that's an area where you can find loads of help online. Some things I can see off the bat would be "Fade in" at the beginning, your action lines are in all CAPS, character introduction needs to be established before their first lin...

1 month ago | read more...
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A ghostly, demon like X-Men type story with the beginning starts in a foggy day. Then a girl has an X-men demon type experience.