Friends are forever
Summary5 friends all trying to balance the weight of their personal lives and maintain a healthy friendship
Concept is not strong enough.
The first ten pages didn't draw me in.
The plot is not very good.
The protagonist or should I say protagonists are not interesting at all.
Scenes are not written well at all.
Dialogue is not well written.
I thought this was pretty good, and could probably be even better.
This is not how a screenplay is formatted. Google "Screenplay formatting" and then go to WriterDuet.com and start over again. There are far too many errors in formatting to be worth going through and correcting.