The homies Short

By WordplayTray

Friends are forever


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Genre: Drama
No. Reviews: 5 | Length: 10 pages
Published: 7 months ago


5 friends all trying to balance the weight of their personal lives and maintain a healthy friendship

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By iAmBenny

I got 3 pages in and gave up. This isn't formatted or done by someone who understands screenplay formatting.

  • 4 months ago
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  • 1.25

Concept is not strong enough.
The first ten pages didn't draw me in.
The plot is not very good.
The protagonist or should I say protagonists are not interesting at all.
Scenes are not written well at all.
Dialogue is not well written.

  • 1 month ago
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  • 1.5


  • 1 week ago
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  • 5

I thought this was pretty good, and could probably be even better.

  • 1 week ago
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  • 3.75

This is not how a screenplay is formatted. Google "Screenplay formatting" and then go to and start over again. There are far too many errors in formatting to be worth going through and correcting.

  • 1 week ago
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  • 1.75