A music teacher prepares for an upcoming show whilst harbouring a dark secret.
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Drama | 1 Reviews | 12 pages | 1 year ago | Draft 1
Looking for general feedback on the premise, structure, pacing and dialogue.
First off I would like to say that this is a tough subject, that was taken on rather cleverly. I saw some real high points with solid potential within this script. For instance you have a few really fun lines; "round of 9". I thought that was brilliant, but then again I don't golf. As I tell all writers whose scripts I read, I hope that my critiques do not come across harsh, but can help further you and your story to greater success. So, on to th...
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