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Lucky Beggars


Sometimes not getting what you want is a wonderful stroke of luck.

Draft #2
Draft #1
Peer Rating: 54%
Industry Rating: N/A
Drama,Family | 2 Reviews | 88 pages | 9 months ago | Draft 2


All That Glitters is Not Gold.

Industry Reviews

Peer Reviews

I don't understand your script. So the family wins the lottery and then the dead beat patriarch decides to leave his wife and son. Then they have to get jobs? I'm sorry, but nothing is moving fast in this story. Why don't you include stuff people would do if they did win the lottery There's too much talking and less doing. Have some scenes of this family being happy. Buying all the useless junk they don't need, like a huge house or a solid gold b...

1 month ago |
This script is incredible detailed. The script is written very well. I love how the story takes off. First it has a great beginning, but then everything goes downhill when the father takes advantage of his wife's lottery winnings. Soon the mother leaves the father with their son and go to find another place.

This script is very great. IT shows real issues like abuse and hard times. This script feels like it was written by someone's life exp...

1 month ago |
In all honesty, I've been wanting to read this script for quite some time, pretty much since I saw it on here. I haven't had the time to actually read and review it because I've been busy with work. The idea for this story was interesting enough to get me to finally start reading it and once I started reading this, I legitimately couldn't stop. Here were my thoughts:

1. Concept - Although the concept is a decent one, it has been done before to...

1 month ago |

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