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James Bond 007-Long Love Lost

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Bond has a wild adventure ahead of him with his arch nemesis Blofeld.

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Action/Adventure,Mystery/Suspense,Drama | 5 Reviews | 9 pages | 4 months ago | Draft 3

Summary

James Bond has a dream of his arch nemesis Blofeld, this dream might just be more real than he thinks. beginning of a 007 fan fiction screenplay, I need help getting ideas on how to continue it.

Reviews

I'll start out by saying that I have not seen any of the James Bond films myself so anything to do with character, dialogue or story will not be apart of this review. However, I would be interested in how you see this project long term. Is this a short film to be shown at a festival? A series of short films? Is this a new feature film and you just haven't written the rest yet? Or are you just writing this for fun? But overall, things to note are...

3 months ago | read more...
By choosing to write a script whose main character is James Bond, you’ve set a very high bar, and usually, only the most seasoned writers tackle this momentous task. Unfortunately, you fell short of that bar.
Here are the areas where I judged your script:
1. Does your script set the scene/time-period? Yes and no. We know it’s the interior of MI-6 (wherever that is: from other Bond movies, MI-6 is in London; however, if you’re the one person who...

1 month ago | read more...
D Ray Van Top Reviewer
I'll get right into it. I know asking for reviews on your first couple pages may be exciting; you want to know if the concept is good enough to keep going, but at least make sure your formatting and grammar are great before requesting. I suggest you go back and edit all of your typos before requesting another review. Your descriptions often run into each other like run-on sentences. Your use of multiple question and exclamation marks is very amat...

1 month ago | read more...
Claire Benedix Top Reviewer
This is James Bond so we all know the story and I like the new plot of the mind altering power and return of an old foe he thought he had killed. The clown part is kind of funny and I like that beginning. Your formatting is good and you obviously know most of the rules. I would change the cardboard cut out of Bond to something more scientific in feel and maybe something that comes out his watch? An AI? Just a thought. I think you have the feel fo...

2 weeks ago | read more...
WL Wright Top Reviewer
To be honest bro, writing a script based on James Bond probably won't get you anywhere as a screenwriter in Hollywood (if that's what you are aiming for). Agents, Managers and Producers are all looking for original work and James Bond has been around since my grandmother was a kid. No one is going to take a James Bond script seriously from a spec writer, just bare that in mind.
Having said that, the story you told of James Bond isn't very origi...

2 weeks ago | read more...
Kwesi Lewis Top Reviewer

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