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James Green uploaded a script.
6 hours ago
She is chosen television
Genre: Action/Adventure,Drama,Horror
Logline: When the cursed town of Sunhaven is mysteriously rebuilt, a lifelong slayer must embrace her dark destiny and train her unsuspecting daughter to battle the ancient evil she thought she’d destroyed forever
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Div Methil uploaded a script.
6 days ago
Karmic Connection feature
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Logline: After his daughter’s brutal murder, Raman Menon vows revenge, but his premature death forces him to seek justice in his next life. As he navigates the enigmatic world of rebirth, he uncovers hidden truths and faces unforeseen challenges that blur the lines between vengeance and redemption.
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Roscoe Plikerd uploaded a script.
1 week ago
SHOTGUN WEDDING: HOW TO FALL FOR A GIRL feature
Genre: Comedy,Romance
Logline: Years after a childhood incident at a theme park separated them, a neurotic young man must escape a literal shotgun wedding to reunite with his lost true love.
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L.I. Shine uploaded a script.
2 weeks ago
Let It Shine short
Genre: Drama,Comedy
Logline: n 1989 Hawkins, a matured Steve Harrington hides his heartbreak behind a professional mask—until he’s forced to stop running and finally be present with Nancy Wheeler.
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Gonzalo Canedo uploaded a script.
1 month ago
I Missed You, Darling feature
Genre: Horror,Thriller
Logline: An escort is hired to impersonate a renowned surgeon’s ex-wife to help him rebuild his family, but the deeper she settles into the role, the more she feels trapped inside a life that isn’t hers.
Gonzalo Canedo just joined ScriptMother!
1 month ago
Kurt Weygantt just purchased a review. Claim it here
1 month ago
Six Brides For Dead Pine Creek feature
Genre: Western
Logline: In the aftermath of the American Civil War, a battle-hardened wagon guide escorts six mailorder brides across dangerous frontier territory, where clashes with outlaws, lawmen, and Native nations force both the women and the guide to confront what it truly takes to build a life from nothing.
Kurt Weygantt completed a review for
1 month ago
We’re No Saints feature
Genre: Crime,Drama
Review Rating:

We’re No Saints is a character-driven crime drama that distinguishes itself through its strong sense of place and authentic portrayal of a tight-knit community. The script effectively captures the atmosphere of Chicago’s Taylor Street neighborhood, using cultural traditions, family dynamics, and religious influences to create a believable and immersive setting. This grounded environment supports the emotional themes of loyalty, morality, and personal responsibility that run throughout the story. The screenplay’s greatest strength lies in its dialogue and character interactions, which feel natural and reflective of long-standing relationships within the community. These conversations help establish a lived-in world where personal history and shared culture influence the choices of the characters. The central character, Dom, provides a solid emotional anchor as the narrative explores his internal struggle between faith, loyalty, and the realities of the environment around him. While the story is engaging, certain sections—particularly in the middle act—could benefit from tighter pacing and clearer escalation of dramatic stakes. Some dialogue-heavy scenes could be slightly trimmed to maintain narrative momentum. Clarifying the emotional weight of a few turning points would also strengthen the overall dramatic arc. Overall, the script demonstrates strong storytelling instincts, effective dialogue, and a clear understanding of character-driven drama. With moderate refinement in pacing and structural emphasis, the screenplay has the potential to become a compelling and engaging crime drama.

miko lim uploaded a script.
1 month ago
skiagraphia short
Genre: Thriller
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