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Xzilez uploaded a feature screenplay
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The Void feature
Genre: Horror,Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Comedy
A self-proclaimed failure takes a hallucinogen drug to figure out why her life sucks, but meets a worm in a vodka bottle that sends her on an inner journey to fight her demons and escape her self inflicted torment, while playing a little game of its own.
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short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Mystery/Suspense,Drama
Bond has a wild adventure ahead of him with his arch nemesis Blofeld.
mike harper uploaded a feature screenplay
12 hours ago
Mage's Price feature
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Everything has a cost. Real magic is different. Magic breaks the laws of the world. Jesse is soon to find out the mage's price.
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13 hours ago
short
Genre: Horror,Mystery/Suspense
An award-chasing beautiful vlogger accidentally reacts to the video of a psychopathic fan.
Emil Axelsson uploaded a feature screenplay
14 hours ago
STAR WARS - The High Republic feature
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Drama
A smple continuation of Star Wars post episode 6 - completely disregarding the new sequel trilogy.
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14 hours ago
tv series
Genre: Comedy,Thriller
When his best friend is suddenly put on the path to stardom, a writer realizes that Hollywood may be hiding some strange secrets.
Xzilez uploaded a feature screenplay
16 hours ago
The Tale of Us feature
Genre: Drama
Suburban citizens of all walks of life and ages cope with interweaving stories about emotional distress, pain, and overcoming their demons, leading to a carnival where one of them commits suicide.
mike harper completed a review for
17 hours ago
They Never Left feature
Genre: Drama,Comedy,Horror
Review Rating:

Overall, the script is well-formatted and follows the plot beats pretty good. t may be my own sense of humor, but I did not relate to any comedic tropes you attempted. I don't want to nit-pick this work because I can tell you spent a lot of hours and hard work to make this comes to life. Pun intended. I suggest looking for the screenplays for "Apartment 1303" (Japanese version and the 2007 film based on STephen King's short story "1408". Bizzare events, dramatic beats, character dialogue and horror aspects would assist you in pulling the tropes and thematic elements into the script. I'm not saying it's not good, just that it can use a bit more unpredictability and help with the ending, which a horror fan like myself predicted. Some of my initial items in the first 10 pages are: pg 1. Action line suggest remove the word Neat. Combine "Immaculately clean and organized." It reads a double stating the description. No need to restate this type of music. Streamline the action to, "An Antique RECORD PLAYER plays a vinyl. It spins hypnotically beneath the needle." Do people leave lipstick in the medicine cabinet or on the sink counter? Just asking because my personal experience has been the countertop. Marching = Marches How does he kick the chair if he stands on it? Tip it over, maybe? Great introduction to Darwin. I think you can give a couple of sentences to bring Madeline and Ed motivation or thematic life. As it is, they feel more as supporting characters that are 2-dimensional. The paranormal question from Scotty came out of nowhere. I think even buzzed Darwin would have reacted stronger at such an odd question and seeing FRANK in the closet.

Teigh Reed just claimed a review for a television script
1 day ago
Bread and Circuses - #CarpeNoctem tv series
Genre: Comedy,Thriller
When his best friend is suddenly put on the path to stardom, a writer realizes that Hollywood may be hiding some strange secrets.
Teigh Reed completed a review for
1 day ago
Entitled feature
Genre: Thriller
Review Rating:

Micro-budget horror movies if done right can be lucrative. This script has an inventive concept that I believe works in today’s market. It is for a particular demographic; I do not believe that I fit that demo but I do love horror movies and I believe I can offer an opinion on what I believe works/doesn’t work with the script. The two main characters feel a bit similar to each other. Their dialogue is frat boyish, which is okay for this type of movie. I do believe there are times though their dialogue states the obvious. As for the girl, she fits the genre. When it comes to the dialogue, the biggest flaw is with the Voice character. This character needs to have clever dialogue. It hurts your payoff if it is not stronger. For example, when we meet the Voice on page 43, the dialogue when asked who are you, responds, “I am what I am”. This character is the smartest person in the room and that’s how she responds? Why not give the characters something? At this point, they should be trying to outwit the Voice. On page 46, Shawn and Paul think they are dealing with a demon. That is a good reveal. The biggest flaw with the script, IMHO, is that I think that reveal is taken for granted. You wait until the end to capitalize off of it but you do not allow the viewers to learn anything about this ---who is pulling the strings. When the viewers get to the end and we get the reveal of the voice, the average viewer will go huh? You don’t want your viewers to leave your movie and go who was that and have to ask Alexa. You need to sprinkle that throughout the movie and have it where one of your characters is clever enough to tie the puzzle together. Look at the movie Heredity and Midsomer. These two movies have folk like characters that were explained to the audiences who were not familiar with the subject matter. There are a few things you can get away with not explaining in movies such as ghosts, vampires but everything else not known to GP needs to be at least tackled in the script. This is the biggest element that you are missing with your script.

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feature
Genre: Horror,Comedy,Mystery/Suspense
Fake ghost hunters must prove the ghost behind "The Man With Hell's Eyes" photo is real so they can receive a million dollars from their network before one of their own dies of cancer.
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Miss Direction (Pilot) tv series
Genre: Mystery/Suspense,Romance,Drama
After a billionaire offers a reward to meet a reclusive mystery writer , a down on her luck fan fiction mystery writer impersonates the world-famous mystery writer. But soon realizes she must find the real mystery writer.
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tv series
Genre: Mystery/Suspense,Romance,Drama
After a billionaire offers a reward to meet a reclusive mystery writer , a down on her luck fan fiction mystery writer impersonates the world-famous mystery writer. But soon realizes she must find the real mystery writer.
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tv series
Genre: Comedy,Romance,Mystery/Suspense
Plans and fantasies have one thing in common, they aren’t going to happen exactly as you planned. Rosh and Sal collectively learn this as they recount the events in which Rosh meets his crush, Tracy.
Reid Barwick uploaded a television screenplay
1 day ago
Rapture of Elle Divine - Boardrooms E2 tv series
Genre: Drama,Action/Adventure
Black Angels syndicate meet to discuss new opportunities and threats have arisen in the pandemic. In Chicago, to begin Elle’s trip wire’s another Black Angel and needs to adjust her strategy.
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2 days ago
Them Wretched Souls feature
Genre: Western
A Stranger with a sword and a Native American priest journey through Hell.

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